Often when a moment of crisis is prevalent,we cry out loud,questioning the times and ourselves as to what the pain that we are enduring could possibly be of value to our lives.A most personal feeling,and we are so afraid to talk about anything personal.But one thing we fail to understand - is that everything IS personal.
Pain.Just a concept for some who may write theses on it.But only those who endure it understand its deeper implications that can only be comprehended through the depth of feeling.
I read somewhere-pain and distress are transient just like life is - a plan of the Eternal.
Death of a loved one.Loss.Despair.Failure.Disappointment.
Death does not close all-it is only a beginning or rather a continuation into the next bit of the REAL PLAN.
Feel the suffering.Embrace it,enjoy it even.Believe in it.Let it make you BEAUTIFUL.
Seize the goddamn moment regardless of what each momentum brings,be it joy or tears.Just FEEL.Just LIVE.Know that you can.
This very suffering shall bring with it the courage to be strong.The courage to move on.
Often our failings as human beings bring pain to us.If we are forgiven by those we injure we feel redeemed (redemption has stories to tell).When we forgive others for the pain and suffering they inflict on us,we are also redeemed then.
Life teaches us so many lessons-of accepting certain situations - passing away of a loved one,separation from a lover,inevitable circumstances.
It is here we need to make a choice- A choice to learn.A choice to listen more.A choice to live more.And a choice to be more.
Yes,life teaches us so many lessons and pain is such an integral part of it,just like joy is.Pain blesses us - with the power to understand,to forgive,to relent,to hold on to memories,to let go,to be stronger,to be calmer,to be angry,to err and to be redeemed.
Pain makes this imperfect world,beautiful.
But then again that is personal.But I'm not afraid to talk about it anymore.
Oh,how we misunderstand Pain.
-Sriya Coomer
2:41 AM
Pain.Just a concept for some who may write theses on it.But only those who endure it understand its deeper implications that can only be comprehended through the depth of feeling.
I read somewhere-pain and distress are transient just like life is - a plan of the Eternal.
Death of a loved one.Loss.Despair.Failure.Disappointment.
Death does not close all-it is only a beginning or rather a continuation into the next bit of the REAL PLAN.
Feel the suffering.Embrace it,enjoy it even.Believe in it.Let it make you BEAUTIFUL.
Seize the goddamn moment regardless of what each momentum brings,be it joy or tears.Just FEEL.Just LIVE.Know that you can.
This very suffering shall bring with it the courage to be strong.The courage to move on.
Often our failings as human beings bring pain to us.If we are forgiven by those we injure we feel redeemed (redemption has stories to tell).When we forgive others for the pain and suffering they inflict on us,we are also redeemed then.
Life teaches us so many lessons-of accepting certain situations - passing away of a loved one,separation from a lover,inevitable circumstances.
It is here we need to make a choice- A choice to learn.A choice to listen more.A choice to live more.And a choice to be more.
Yes,life teaches us so many lessons and pain is such an integral part of it,just like joy is.Pain blesses us - with the power to understand,to forgive,to relent,to hold on to memories,to let go,to be stronger,to be calmer,to be angry,to err and to be redeemed.
Pain makes this imperfect world,beautiful.
But then again that is personal.But I'm not afraid to talk about it anymore.
Oh,how we misunderstand Pain.
-Sriya Coomer
2:41 AM
11 comments:
very honest,
nice entry to read.
dont forget glutamate, the human enzyme which causes pain (in simple words) and sometimes its adverse reactions - the kind of things that give you pleasure in pain ... pain is very strange talk more about this...
keep writing
cheers
xxx
hmmm....
clear...elaborate...literal....
nice poem...bt i guess u hvnt seen much of d world yet..wth maturity ull learn d dept of it nd may be thn ull emerge wth betr poetry..nys keep writing !
hey there Rania...i hope u're mature enough to understand that this isn't a piece of poetry at all..it's prose by the way...and the 'matured' editors of my school magazine (in most people's opinion) have in fact thought this piece of immature "poetry" fit. :) but thanks for the comment.And Yes i haven't seen much of the world yet.But i get stronger with each tiny experience i go through..when u come to think of it,how many of us HAVE seen everythin there is to see/understand ..have u ? I appreciate ur comment. Thanks for reading !
and what is nys?
Hello... am a complete stranger to u...but i still feel that ur words do have feelings... but somehow i dont think they run deep... They are too superficial too bookish or should i say hear-and-say?!? I got a feeling that u r trying to get a dig on someone... U were pretty abrupt on the emotion...too immaturish maybe.. and with a nice tete-a-tete with ur friend that u had in ur comments it seems u r not open to criticism coming from a close pal or an unknown... ur words were good but they need a little bit of realism...keep ur attitude in check maybe ur words wd shine more... Lol i know u would take words wid a pinch of salt...but sweets take life as it comes... and hope u comment on my comment here... :)
tards1Hi Ateet...firstly,I'm very open to criticism (trust me..my Dad is my cruelest critic!)But i was a little annoyed by my "friend" here since she didn't even bother to read my entry but commented because she needed to for very personal reasons...anyway...i wud still like to justify what i've written and my intent (this is a democratic society..u're entitled to ur opinion and so am i) so here goes...just because my matter is bookish or appears to be superficial to u or certain other people does not mean that i do not mean them or necessarily believe in them...u don't know me..u're right...u're a stranger..therefore u do not really know the fact that i like to write what i actually FEEL/BELIEVE irrespective of the fact that people might find it superficial/bookish/unrealistic...well if we were to fear IDEALISM so much what principles wud be believe in ...?? How wud we even make an attempt here to achieve in reality what we believe is IDEAL ...unabashed realism isn't always my line..even though at certain points/moods i like to reflect on that as well....i do think my attitude has nothin to do with my writing..since my apparent conceit and arrogance does not really affect my writing...i have been honest enuff and brave enuff to write what i believe and the fact that it is bringing criticism thrills me..! If u're a nobody,everyone likes u :P ...thanks for reading!
Oh sure, I being a part of this free speech society commented on ur blog, and expected a reply coz' I'd wanted to know this better, coz' frankly ur blog twitched my curiosity abt u...and more than dat ur comments interested me... so no personal gain or opinion...we talking on words and views not perception sweety :D...
On the point of making it seem as if I have a personal prejudice against u, I'd like to mention one clear fact abt writings and writers... literature is interpreted by the words not intentions... ur words may have been in a different context u trying to potray...but since u already said its bringing criticism (which i agree with u is thrilling..) has left sumthing to be desired... And my deary principles are not preached they are practised... and that practise is realism... Well i take ur word for it that ur attitude has nuthing to do wid ur writing...but still to an average blog reader like me, i got dis-illusioned... but as u already hinted it wasnt for general ppl...for ur fixed 'frnd circle'then all the best to u...
i loved it..
"we are so afraid to talk about anything personal"
"Feel the suffering,..Let it make you BEAUTIFUL."
whoever read this poem and said that it didnt run"deep" is im sorry.. a little retarded..
this peice is very beautifully written and brings to life an emotion all of us go through,,
well written and keep writin.. even if u dont have enuff experience.. the other inexperienced bloggers still appreciate ur work!:P
love u!
Not only literature but most things in life ARE interpreted by their written documentation or words and views...but in order to do so u need to PERCEIVE..withour perception there CAN be no interpretation (be it any kind) ...for e.g,a law's INTENT like u said may not be that important but it's PERCEPTION is in order to have an effective interpretation of it (and to use it in accordance to one's need) .....AND realism is relative...btw how can u say for sure what i preach i do not in fact practise?? That is again gettin personal on ur part...and never did i say my blog is for my fixed friend circle ..u again PERCEIVED and INTERPRETED that (see,your proving my words) ..cya boy
and thanks kiki ..! :D see u soon babe..like tomorrow??? :P
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