I smile
But there’s this pain
Living inside;
I’m supposed to be happy,
These are after all
Precious moments of life.
But there lurks this darkness
I’m hiding in me.
*Plunder*
Laughter
Fades into stillness
Of the stars;
And pain surfaces
Into the heaven of
My heart.
*Façade*
Friendships
New and broken
Leave me shaken
With joy and distress;
And I’m scared no less
Of feelings born
Once again.
*Fallen*
I triumph
Again and again
In so many ways,
Taste of my winnings
Is,oh,so sweet;
But it’s sweeter
With the burden
Of unsaid failures.
*Broken*
Love –
Brings joy into my life;
Wounds my heals;
Opens closed doors,
But listen,
I wanted them closed.
*Numbness*
Life
Is beautiful,
But it means not just breathing,
It’s about living –
Yes,living the pain every day
Again and again,
Is not death beautiful?
*Death*
My heart
Is full
With showers of life –
And my soul explodes
Into grace –
So is this the end?
This IS the end…
*Burial*
Beginning of the end…
In my ear
Hope and despair
Whisper at the same instance,
It is time…
To find myself again;
It’s time again
To *live*
In both joy and pain,
In faith and desolation…
And yet it’s time
To live again…
*Birth*
-Sriya Coomer,'06
P.S-The title,courtesy-Samata Dutta
8 comments:
oi!... new post. n u dint tel me about it... *sadness*..LOL....
u kno the best thing about this post is that u told me the story behind this long after u wrote it... n im readn it even later than that!.. so i can relate to it.... hmmm.... again an untitled entry... i thikn i really shud take this job seriously... my suggestion.. title it ... RESURRECTION... or ..THE RESSURECTION... just a suggestion.... but definitely title it.... it automatically becomes richer!
love u loads srya baby..
sam
hey...this was good...showed some character...its really nice that history can bring out such emotions in u...but remember one thing...ur words show ur arrogance and insecurity...never be insecure in life in relations...they'd bring out the worst in u... looking fwd for new posts...hope u can stand me ;)
okay tell me somethin...illustrate how my words show ARROGANCE?? justify ur critique on my work..don't just ramble away..
and trust me i'm very secure in my relationships...i have one of the best family life one can dream on,the most popular and AWESOME friends,a boyfriend who left his girl of THREE years to be with me and loves me like CRAZZZZYYYYYY..I have a lot goin for me,Ateet and i hope u'll be happy for me for that :) ..and this poem is about a phase i was goin thru...(everyone does) and that makes us stronger...if u haven't noticed the poem ends on a positive note...don't misunderstand abstractism for insecurity or other personal issues...i have very few of them :) ...but it's so much fun analysing ur comments ..keep commenting!!!
**dream of
Ateet here aha! touchy... so madam is very touchy...well u didnot claim i am the best or the likes, but its a feel an undercurrent in ur writing, and as i said earlier u r not open to criticism :)...congrats on a great family and frnds...and again i say if u have to drive home the fact (that to in caps) that ur bf left his gf (or ex)shows ur doubt and insecurity...but y do i comment on dat? dats not a part of ur blog!!to adios madam...and just remember (a personal advice) trust ur instinct and not rely on them!
hun u already commented on that which is not part of my blog...and u are honestly nobody to comment on that at all..but u can comment away sweetheart because honestly it makes zero difference to our lives...it's crazy how funny everyone else finds ur comments because i'm the last person to be INSECURE(yes,in caps since u seem to have done a PHD in analysing computer interactions :P) especially about my boyfriend...ntohin TO be insecure about...anyway u seem to want to get personal all the time...that has nothin to do with my blog honey
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