When you're with me,There's nothing I could long for more
Than the mere truth of you
With me here.
Reveling in your presence,
Each moment is like a lifetime
-of never ending lifetimes;
Your every breath
Enlightening my very existence,
I yearn for your touch
Of life -that you stir in me;
The acceptance you've made me feel
And believe.
You've travelled beyond my skin
-across my mind,
Reaching through my heart
And touched my soul,
You've made me *real*.
-Sriya Coomer
8 comments:
ok... here's wat i hav to say... n its quite a bit..
i dint understand y u titled this one "only you"...
also, some of the sentences... they seem a little strangely constructd....
but i like the way u end it...i always do....
oh. n next time u post something new.. MAKE SURE TO TEL ME....
MORON!!!!!!!!!
u know i really like the way ur mind works.. its very u... and the way u write is as complex as u.. if u get wat im trying .. very inarticulately.. to say..
i like more than the writing the ideas behind the writing... they are REAL~..
"Each moment is like a lifetime
-of never ending lifetimes"
i love that...
Thanks Kiki...i know what u mean :) ..u kinda know every idea in my head anyway gurl!
Sam, I titled it so because i think it's pretty apt (in my head) and titles are after all personal...I'll explain..."Only You" because Only The One can make me feel what i've described....the sentence construction is nothin but one single sentence flowing into two distinct verse-lines (u'll notice they don't have punctuations there where the flow is intended) ..have given it thought ;)
I love you......'real'ly
awww sayeeennn
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