I FEEL...

I feel so much.. Urge. Desire. Joy. Frenzy. Pain. Beauty. Silence. ..........................................I write
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Monday, March 19, 2007

Just Perfect


I'm sorry it's not enough

I'm sorry we're too proud.

I'm sorry we're always screaming.

I'm sorry you drive me up the wall.

I'm sorry I'm always caught in the middle of every day insignificance.


I'm sorry you think you can't speak your mind.

I'm sorry I always have to.

I'm sorry I sometimes cry.

I'm sorry you don't.

I'm sorry you think things have changed.

I'm sorry I think they haven't.

I'm sorry for giving up so easily.

I'm sorry you don't try hard enough.


I'm sorry I'm not great.

I'm sorry you don't understand.

I'm sorry I walk away.

I'm sorry you said those words.

I'm sorry we're like a sad love song now.

I'm sorry this is not the way it's supposed to be.


I'm sorry I'm hurting.

I'm sorry you are too.



But I know there shall be no one else's hand to hold in mine

And I know there can be no other who could make you feel the way I make you feel.

..there can be no other who can feel my soul in the dark...the way you do.


AND I'm not sorry

for wanting YOU

..to touch me

to love me

to hold me

to kiss these very tears i claim i do NOT cry for you.

... I'm not sorry

for our love.



And I'm SO not sorry

to believe in our 'imperfection'.







-Sriya Coomer

March 19th,3:46PM

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

nice.......some very raw emotions.......uve written this in a hurry havent you......but that sometimes does bring out the truest feeling in a person......wont go into what sparked the fuse into writing the piece.........well written.....hope u clear the little niggles in your head n u will se the clear path that is already present in front of you......till then....

Sriya said...

till then..I'll keep calling it " tinee wenee " ...awwwwwww BABYYYY :P

kiki said...

very nice... im sure it was a releif once u finished it huh?! things that needed to be said..
i like it a lot...
I'm sorry I'm always caught in the middle of every day insignificance."
very beautiful.
very very well written

porphyria said...

now u htinkin like me babes... n thats a good thing..
love u
sam